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Mlp FiM belongs to Laurn Faust
I will Upload part 5 when I have enough time.
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She looked closer into the mirror. Blinking her eyes, extending her long lashes. "Rarity, Thank you so much" She smiled politely and headed out towards the street. Looking down at her hooves, she thought of the first time she had ever set eyes on Soarin, and it seemed as the sound and ponies moving around her became a blur, as if they were not there. She made up her mind. Soarin. He wasn't right.  BrayBurn. However, was the one how understood her. Soarin was messing with her head, which was what he did best. "BrayBurn, BrayBurn it is" She finally looked up, and found out what she had realised. Soarin was a mistake. A Beautiful mistake.

BrayBurn walked down Pony Ville streets, chewing on a piece of straw and tipping his hat, too cover his eyes from the sun. Spotting a sudden rainbow standing out from the crowd. His green eyes grew bigger with happiness, as he scurried towards her. "RAINBOWDASH!" He smiled, stopping by her side. "Oh, Hey there BrayBurn" She flicked her tail and battered her eye lashes at him. "Dash...I....I love your eyes...You wear make up? Dash! It looks great!" He smiled and brushed his fur ageist her side. RainbowDash laughed and grinned back. It felt like they had been a couple forever. "BrayBurn, I can finally return something..." She said, looking up to meet his eyes. "I love you too...."

They walked down the streets together. He paid for them to have a cupcake each, laughing at each other when they had cream all around her mouth.


"Soarin...are you sure you can do this?" SpitFire was lashing her tail, a smug look across her face. "You can never beat my speeds." Soarin just laughed in her face. "I think you will find that I can beat you...I had a great trainer." SpitFire held a confused look on her face. "What are you on about, Soarin?" But Soarin was already shooting off, trying to beat SpitFire at his lap around PonyVillie. Wind rushed though his ears and mane, narrowing his eyes, to keep them from crying. Flapping his wings harder, faster, harder, Stop.  He skidded too a halt in the air. Looking down on RainbowDash and BrayBurn sharing a ice cream together. BrayBurn licked a bit off RainbowDash's cheek. Time seemed to stop around him. Nothing else mattered. She was laughing, having fun. Being loved. Which raged Soarin the most. "I don't love her!" He whispered to himself over and over again. "She is a friend, trainer, and a rival! I can't!" Again, he torched his heart. Then he swooped down and landed, letting his ears drop, feeling sad. He couldn't love her. She couldn't love him. If they ended up in love, who knows what might happen. They didn't want to destroy the wonderful friendship they had.

"Hey BrayBurn, this is so much fun!" Rainbow flicked her tail around his legs and placed her head on his back, smiling. "Im so happy!"
"Me too, Dashie."

Dashie. Dashie. Dashie. Soarin's ears pricked. So did RainbowDash's as she removed her head from his back too look at him.  Suddenly, she caught a strange shifty blue character in the back ground. A look on his face, filled with sadness and rage mixed together. "I'll be right back, BrayBurn." She licked his cheek and nuzzled him. BrayBurn watched her leave and tipped his hat.

"Soarin!" Her voice snapped. Soarin's head cracked around. His eyes grew massive at the sight of her. "Dashie!" He raced too her, ready to pull her close. But RainbowDash shoved him back. "Soarin! What's the matter? Stay out of my business with BrayBurn, in fact stay out of this way! You screwed up pony!" She stomped her hoof on the floor, making a loud clopping noise, covering up the sound of Soarin's heart breaking, as her words flew into him like knifes. "Rainbow...."
I like this part! :D Didint take me long! :D Helps when listing to music
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Sorry I accidently put I will upload part 5 when I have enough time. By part 5 I mean Part 6! Sorry about that. I need too sleep more!
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corby12 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
I mean with braeburn and soarin in the same fanfic
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corby12 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Sorry i like the story its just i hate storys that have braeburn and soarin for a few reasons but i do like it so far
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xXLibbyBieberxX Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Writer
Well thanks and sorry the story isn't exactly to you have told me what you like. Other people have to enjoy it aswell, not just what you want.
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corby12 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
PLEASE DON'T BRAE BURN IS A GAY PONY , BRAE BURN IS A GAY PONY , BRAE BURN IS A GAY PONY
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xXLibbyBieberxX Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student Writer
Um... glad to hear you liked it?
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Undead-Rainbow Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student General Artist
D:>
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xXLibbyBieberxX Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student Writer
Dun Dun Dun! :icondundundunplz:
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maxthewarrior Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
wow
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xXLibbyBieberxX Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Writer
Wow in good or wow in bad? :lol:
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maxthewarrior Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
good
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